Was late into summer,
things started going wrong.
Clashing of our egos,
like hammer and tongs.
early into summer,
she had taken off the ring,
The tensions and the distance
Uncoiling like a spring.
The middle of the summer,
my hottest one yet.
We grew further apart,
our intentions never met.
Turning, twisting in my bed,
the wind outside blowing strong.
it suddenly hit me on my head
how could i let things go, oh so wrong!
And now i'm out to win her back,
i know its a mountain of a task.
The rains will bring me back solace,
but a little prayer from you is all i ask...
35 comments:
This is wonderful :) loved it!
so please change the stupid description of the blog part that says Arjun writes nonsense!!! ;) and as I said this one inspired me to write two ;)
whoa!! kyato.. its awesome!! loved it.. :D
:D *hugs* im too lazy to copy paste the reply i sent u ..but u already know wat i think of it .. its friggin awesome :P .. ok wait , ill just copy paste it :P there u go - my first reaction to it :
OMFG its brilliant me love ~! :D
i especially love the first lines of each stanza .. its very cute for a first time attempt .. and
u know wat ? u can never write those hopelessly angst-filled , tragic , dramatic shit that some ppl try passing off as heartfelt poetry ...and thank god for that !
put it up on the blog NOW !
lotsa love n hugs
disloca
well , its on the blog now :P
All I have to say is..I hope spring comes to you soon..in full swing..!
disloca?????
wat the hell is disloca????
@prateek-disloca is short for DISLOCAted brain. Or maybe a non existant one. U choose
dude its dislocated knee...
Pooja. You've spoken to her, JUST before the time YOU dropped the glass of water on me...
:P
CHICK FIGHTTTTTTTTTTTTTT !!!!!!!!!!!
**munches popcorn**
tone wat down arjun? my shitty angst ridden pathetic excuses for poetry?
Aing??
:O
what? don tell me she's zapped ur brains of all concious thought
i edited that comment for a REASON...
**Slluuurrrrrrrrrppppppp**
damn no ice in the pepsi
**Watches fight getting more intewesting**
if you calm down enough, you'll see i'm not taking sides :)
yes i knw. always the angel aren't u
dont get me started on you. I'm not angry at u. dont make me
aye fruiter, try these new fries amigo! :D
goes well with the chilli sauce!
**Munch munch munch munch**
**BURP**
**SLURPPPP**
Whack him wit ur purse aishu
no sharky i'm now thinking.... is he actually worth my time and energy? same goes to pooja
PURSE!! LMAO
she not angry with me :P dincha notise?
@ aish
btw, got anything to say abt the POEM? :)
dude why is SHE getting ticked off?
does she think poojaz comments were directed at HER by any chance? :|
ok so she doesnt have a purse....
WHACK HIM WITH UR WALLET aish...
n fill it with coins before u do ;)
no. i dont. cept that its pretty okay for an amateur
wow arjun..ur so smart...i'm bowled over by ur intelligence...
i take that as a compliment :)
not many ppl have said tht to me before...
***note to self***
LAWRENCE!! why are you slapping a monkey, boy!
HE STARTED IT!!
who's evolved...
** grumble grumble **
WHOZ EVOLVED??
...........
i'm being sarcastic in case u didnt notice
The sarcastic one said that she has better things to do and is off doing them...Cheerio
Oh you mean ran away...
hmm.
ran away? good joke. almost as good a joke as...
**Stops hand filled with popcorn in mid air**
ALMOST AS GOOD A JOKE AS................................???????????!!!?!?!?!?!?!?!??!?!?!?!?!
*empties bowl of popcorn on ur head* nothing! because wat i was gonna saw was really really bitchy and i'm not that mean!
i mean wat i was gonna say....
dat was cool.. i enjoyed the summer part! ;)
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